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Why is there a comma in the, title?
It indicates a pause, and a separation of the two objects in the sentence. It is a subtly different sentence than "Have I been Pwned owner Pwned", and is clearer with greater emphasis on what happened.
wouldn't it be clearer with
"Have I Been Pwned" owner pwned.
Owner of "Have I Been Pwned" pwned.
?
Clarity is not normally something headlines are all that concerned with (some are intentionally opaque, but this one is just joking around). Anyway, I think the "[foo], [bar]ed" structure was a lot more common some decades before the Internet—I had no trouble parsing it, but this marks the first time in a while that I've seen it, and I can see how it might be unfamiliar to some audiences.
I'd argue that the original is clearer and more fun than these, but style is subjective.
It feels awkward to me. I don't think it's grammatically correct. To me, it doesn't add any clarity, especially when the comma could've been the word "got" or something, lol
Headlines are generally pretty flexible with grammar, because a good headline is supposed to be terse.
I think it's fine.
I think a professional headline would usually just lack the comma there. Headlines typically have weird phrasing (due to their terseness), but they're generally still grammatically sound.
I think "HackerNews owner hacked" would be a headline, rather than "HackerNews owner, hacked".
"Have I Been Pwned owner pwned" seems to be on par with "Headline English" to me